Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: Evening Grosbeak

  1. #1
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Russellville, Arkansas
    Posts
    5,189
    Threads
    674
    Thank You Posts

    Default Evening Grosbeak

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    I am lucky to have these beautiful birds visit my feeders in the winter. This is a photo from last winter but they are here today as I work on this, however no snow falling right now. I used topaz clean (my first attempt using Topaz). Please let me know what you think of this head crop. I do have the entire bird but the topaz effect did not show very well when reduced for the web. Is there a way to accomplish this?

  2. #2
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Missouri City, TX
    Posts
    1,032
    Threads
    83
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I don't have Topaz, so can't help with your question. But, I like the composition of the crop and I like the treatment too. Love the colors - the splash of yellow with all the shades of brown! I think maybe painting the eye back in to some degree might make it more "alive" looking to me (if that makes any sense at all). :)

  3. #3
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Apr 2008
    Location
    New Jersey
    Posts
    23,119
    Threads
    1,523
    Thank You Posts
    Blog Entries
    55

    Default

    Nancy, Sometimes the effect of the filter can be faint unless it is right in your face. I might back off the filter just a hair and reveal the eye as Patti suggests. Very nice look to this and I bet this is sharp as heck!!:) As far as the comp goes you could take a small slice off the back so it doesn't appear as centered.

  4. #4
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Russellville, Arkansas
    Posts
    5,189
    Threads
    674
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    I revealed the original eye and changed the crop somewhat, hopefully for the better :).

  5. #5
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Apr 2008
    Location
    New Jersey
    Posts
    23,119
    Threads
    1,523
    Thank You Posts
    Blog Entries
    55

    Default

    I think it looks better.:)

  6. #6
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Kingston, Wa. USA
    Posts
    1,106
    Threads
    227
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Love the repost, Nancy. Colors are fantastic.
    With Topaz, I have found it to be very image size specific. Almost needs to be done on the size (for web or print) that it will be used for. I have made some for the web that do not look the same as full sized prints.

  7. #7
    BPN Member Christopher Miller's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Massachusetts
    Posts
    5,677
    Threads
    586
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Awesome effect, Patti! I especially like the look of the snow(at least, I think it's snow?) on the beak. Nice repost.
    God Bless
    Christopher, Old Photo Master and Master Texturizer

    Old Memories Photography

  8. #8
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Russellville, Arkansas
    Posts
    5,189
    Threads
    674
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Yes that is snow on the beak and snowflakes on the bird and snow falling in the background :).

  9. #9
    BPN Member Kerry Perkins's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    Simi Valley, California
    Posts
    8,310
    Threads
    1,048
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice work Nancy, I like the repost. Good job with topaz clean. :cool: Sometimes these filters add so much detail that it is difficult to size properly without losing a lot of it. More detail equals bigger file size. I love the effect you got here.
    "It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera... they are made with the eye, heart, and head." - Henri Cartier Bresson

    Please visit me on the web at http://kerryperkinsphotography.com


Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics