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    Hello,
    Took this near the Cape Fear River in North Carolina, 7D with Canon 300mm f/4 with 1.4 TC, ISO 200, f/5.6, 1/1250 at around noon, although the sun is relatively low in the sky. I cloned out some bird droppings on the wood, and performed levels, S&H, vibrance and clarity. This was also slightly cropped, and sharpened. These guys seemed to like the slight chirping noise my camera made when focusing, and kept coming closer and closer. Looking now, it seems like I have too much foreground, and maybe too much sky. I had wanted to keep the original aspect ratio though.
    Thanks for looking,
    Kevin

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    :)

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    Just to advise no pic showing for me here
    check it was attached size/dimensions need to be just right or it will kick it

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    Thanks Rich. Hmmm, that's strange - when I first posted it I didn't see anything either. Then, I went back in and the image shows for me. I know I made it 800 px on the vertical and the size is under 200kb so I'm not sure what's wrong. :confused:

    Other than that, how'd you like it? :p

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    That's funny - now it's gone again. Just an icon displays. Let me check this out...

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    Hello,
    Took this near the Cape Fear River in North Carolina, 7D with Canon 300mm f/4 with 1.4 TC, ISO 200, f/5.6, 1/1250 at around noon, although the sun is relatively low in the sky. I cloned out some bird droppings on the wood, and performed levels, S&H, vibrance and clarity. This was also slightly cropped, and sharpened. These guys seemed to like the slight chirping noise my camera made when focusing, and kept coming closer and closer. Looking now, it seems like I have too much foreground, and maybe too much sky. I had wanted to keep the original aspect ratio though.
    Thanks for looking,
    Kevin

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    Now I see it!

    Nice sharp details and lovely BG; I would take a little off the top to balance, but lets see what the experts think

    tfs and nice first post


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    Last edited by Richard Unsworth; 12-06-2010 at 12:55 PM.

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    Thanks Rich - I reduced to 790 px and also compressed a bit more to get it well under 200kb. Hopefully it shows in the post above yours now...
    Kevin

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    Lovely looking photo.

    If mine, I might take a bit off bottom and add a tad to left if you have it.

    Even if hh I think you might have dropped ss for a bit more dof as well as raising ISO to 400 for another stop.

    Well done.

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    Kevin, your photo needed to be that small because you left the resolution up at 300. For web, it only needs to be at 72. Increase your size and decrease your resolution next time and we'll get a larger print (makes it easier to see the small details.) If you need more help doing this let me know and I'll walk you through it.

    Lovely sparrow! Good head angle (HA) and pose. I do think that because the sparrow is so small the perch below him feels very heavy so I trimmed that down a bit. I don't think there's anything wrong with what you have in the opening post (OP) but thought you should see the two and compare. I also took a small bit off the top and left side since the bird is looking to the right.

    Very nice exposure, colors and details.

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    Thanks Dave. What is hh? I suppose I should look through the site to see if they have common abreviations.

    Julie - thanks so much for the explanation of my file size and yes, I forgot I had resolution set at 300. I agree about your cropping suggestion - now that I look at it the perch seems way too much for such a small bird. I didn't see your re-post of the pic though..
    Thanks again,
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    Kevin, sorry about that! Guess I got in a hurry. Here's the re-crop. And there is a set of abbreviations in the Educational section of the forums that you'll probably want to look at as we tend to write in "shorthand" around here. HH stands for "handheld."

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    Much better Jules. I've already made changes to it for printing. Thanks for spending the time on this!
    Kevin

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