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    White Ibis photo from Gatorland last march Adjusted with LightZone and Nik Silver Efex - yellow and selenium filters

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    verry verry good , Myer , maybe i other colour of a little border it could help to see it better here as the pages are white . nicely done :)

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    Myer, Nice pose. I do wish the foot wasn't clipped. Do you have more room below? I see some artifacts in the BG. I see that the bluish tint is intentional-I might remove it from the bird if it were mine. Looks like you got close to this one. I like the details you captured.:)

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    Denise I clipped the foot but I can get rid of the bluish tint. looking at older pictures tonight and I can see the differnce between then and now :D

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    White-on-white photos are challenging but satisfying. I like the composition here, and the simplicity. The BG needs cleaning up. i would clone out the bit of branch in LLC. I'd like to see the blacks a bit blacker--for more impact. Nice job.

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    Love the white-on-white look here, Myer. Very nice pose and composition. I might remove the tiny bit of branch in the LLC. Well done.
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    I really like the contrast between the dark bill and face with the white of the feathers. Great exposure on the feathers!

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    This has much potential for an Asian piece Myer, but as is, I can't really see the "Asian theme" here? I think if you removed the blue cast, added a small black border, a chop and/or your signature in an Asian font, maybe vertically placed along the right edge, you would have a nice Asian piece here!

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    Dan
    Thanks for the suggestions I will try ithat

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    Here is my try ended up clipping the branch and foot

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    Quote Originally Posted by Myer Bornstein View Post
    Here is my try ended up clipping the branch and foot
    Good try Myer! Here's what I had in mind, without the clip of the foot.

    BTW, our avatars look very similar! Might be the same Fl. Scrub Jay!

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    Dan, Thanks
    The problem I had was finding out how to create a frame and the frame I use woulkd not let me resize it so I wouldn't clip the foot. Did not have a lot of time to work on it since I was leaving for Florida

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    Nicely done Myer. I like Dan's repost. I think the clipped foot is less noticed with the repost.

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