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    Default Female House Finch

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    Really nailed this one.

    Pose, focus, bg and composition look as good as it can get.

    Nice dof as well.

    I am only starting to use flash but this also looks very well done.

    If mine, I might bring the midtones down a bit just to see.

    Very nice.

    Dave

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    Lovely image, Joel. Very nice comp on this and the exposure is very good - the whites seem creamy and full of detail so great job there.

    If anything to improve I guess I'd say more of a view of the tail would be nice. As is it feels a little disconnected from the rest of the body. Still a very strong image IMO. Nicely done!

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    Nice image. FYI, the bird is a female Purple Finch. The face pattern, form and color of the breast streaks, and bill shape all point to that species rather than House Finch.

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    Very nicely done Joel, so much detail :)

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    Joel,
    The only thing I can add is - for my taste, I'd like to see the subject smaller in the frame with a little more tree trunk. IMO this would make an excellent image even stronger.

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    Very nice! Great focus on the eye and I like the vertical shot.
    Nancy

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