
Originally Posted by
Julie Kenward
Yea, Nancy, you did it! It's hard for me to explain what you're doing wrong because I've been a member since day one so I have always uploaded straight from my computer. What was it that you did differently this time that worked? Maybe it will help me explain it to someone else some day.
It's a beautiful pelican image and has many strong points. It does look a bit dark overall - so pulling up the midtones and dark tones a bit should help. You have something in the lower right corner (LRC) that is distracting - I'm guessing it's a closer rock in the foreground (FG) and that's going to be hard to clone out because of its size.
Probably my best suggestion would be to either get lower in angle so the head/eye is looking more at you or waiting for the bird to pop his head up and see what's going on. There's nothing wrong with it as is - you do have his head and eye nicely in focus - but it would be s tronger image if the bird was looking right at you!
Keep at it...you definitely have a lot of positives going on! Be sure to read and critique the other entries here in ETL - the more you see what's right and wrong with the other images the faster you'll learn and the more we'll all grow as photographers.