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Thread: Cooterville Cypress Foggy Sunrise

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    Dave Phillips
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    Default Cooterville Cypress Foggy Sunrise

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    About 20 miles south of my home in NW La is a spot in the road.........Cooterville along the banks of the Red River.
    Here the highway is merely feet from water's edge. This morning the sun had a bright breakthrough
    and the fog was nicely lit....not much compo though.

    Overall saturation increase, Bigma @ 50mm, ISO 800

    thanks for c/c

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    Looks like it was an excellent morning.

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    Alfred Forns
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    Love the feel Those pastel colors look great !!! Would love seeing in a wider ratio Maybe spanning several frames !!! Big Congrats !!!!

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    Judd Patterson
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    Yes, the fog and light here are lovely. I agree with Alfred that more of the scene might be nice...such great scenery.

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    Robert Amoruso
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    I too agree with Alfred on the wider view. For this image, I think you should crop some off the right as it is a bit light (weight - balance) compared to the left.

    Mode and feel in the image with the light and fog is excellent.

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    Dave Phillips
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    thanks for all the critique, much appreciated.

    I reprocessed what I had in original frame and used all of the width.(will try for better balance on next one Robert, thanks)
    Also processed a bit warmer, probably should have cloned bit of tree on right edge?

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    Bret Edge
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    The second version is an improvement. The subtle colors and graphic shapes of trunks and limbs is quite nice. I would suggest cropping to the right of the right-most tree to better balance the image. Nice work!

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