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    Jaime Johnson
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    Hi Jaime, I like how the image is cropped left and right but might have given a bit more room on the bottom to include the whole rock.However, without being there I don't know if that was a single rock or there was other material near it causing a problem. I might have also given the image a small amount more room on top. Good detail in the snow and for my taste I would lighten the water just a bit...

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hey Jaime,
    I'm ok with crop as presented although it would be interesting to see the bottom rock for comparison. I agree with Dave that the water needs to be lightened a bit.....as you lose some of the flow in the darker area. Not much.....but enough to make the flow a bit more prominant. Great detail in the snow too so overall a minor tweak will take this up a notch.

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    Very nice composition, like the flow of the water though the ice

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