Beautiful moment well captured, this image does give me a warm felling :D Your choice of pano crop work well here. Wish the sun is more toward your back and the two birds are a little closer to each other. TFS
Great story, both birds attitude right on, Father standind there all dignified at attention. Mother offering gift with knee curtsy and offering in a loving & sharing manner. I think you nailed a great photo that is definitely a wall hanger.
Ian, what a moment! I'd take a little off both ends - I think that will increase the "privacy" of the moment between the birds. You might also want to look at a little bit of rotation - it feels like its sloping down on the right side by just a tiny bit.
Lovely exposure. Clean up that water! (Must I be the head AND water police?) :D