Jim, I'm not a big fan of high key images, but this is an exception. Has a lovely, pure feel to it. I do think it may need a slight boost in contrast, as it looks a little washed out to me. (Or clarity).
I agree with Grace. My first thought on viewing it was, a bit more contrast. I might also try a version with a little more space to the right, since the birds attention is focused that way.
I like the treatment and think it's a good artistic expression of what you saw. The lifted foot is good and the reflection provides a good base. As Randy suggested, a bit of space to the right might help but I'd also add a bit of space on top.