James nailed my thoughts on this one. I like the pose and the comp but the whites are killing the image here. Do you know what you'd do different next time?
Cheryl, I've toned down the whites as much as I think I can. As James has mentioned the whites reflecting off the boat has caused them to be very very bright. I'm not sure where to go to improve this without affecting the details in the blacks on this.
James, I actually started with a crop that had more canvas on the left, but did it this way as I thought it wasn't adhering to the 2/3's rule.
Julie, for next time I'ld take this image in manual mode again, but not push the histogram so far to the right. Apart from avoiding bright perches like James has suggested, I'm not sure what else I can do. Any help on that would be great.
A black and white bird, it sure doesn't get any tougher than this. Then throw in the perch and it's even harder, but you handled it as well as possible. I wonder if you had spot metered on the bright white if you would have lost the blacks. Sadly or luckily, depending on perspective, I don't have these two colors in a bird here to try. It has to be tough though. Beautiful bird.