You did a good job with the exposure and sharpness. Nice use of fill flash here,,,looks good. The head angle and eye contact are spot on.
I do think the background is somewhat distracting in that it is "busy" with alot of elements that take my eye from the main subject. The head of the finch isn't too bad but the tail definitely is distracting to me.
The pine cones also are somewhat distracting too....you could remove those elements if you took the time and you are so inclined to alter your image that much. The bird itself is beautiful.
I did a quick (not so meticulous) repost with removal of some elements with a layer mask a blur and reverse S curve on the background to reduce contrast just to give you an idea .... hope you don't mind