Chris, I liked the comp and the head angle is nice too. Nice bird too. But the focus seems to be behind the eye. And as you probably already know, the leaves are distracting.
I like the composition ... and for me the leaves well they where there when you took the picture... but I agree it looks a little bit soft in particular the head. An if my memory doesn't play tricks with me; Donacobius atricapilla is less orange/reddish.