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    We found a pair of these on the shores of lake Kariba, unfortunately the light was fading anf the position was not so good. This has been extensively cloned and patched in an attempt to remove large OOF tree trunks in BG.

    Taken from Lake Kariba, Matusadona National Park, Zimbabwe whilst stating At Rhino Island Lodge, 17th September 2010

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    I really like how the gray feathers radiate across his body and the swooping ones coming off his neck. The available light lent itself well for bringing out his colors and details. Wish his head was a little higher so not to merge with the body. Evidence of your cleanup is still evident but just a little more TLC should clean that up.

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    Loverly bird, feather patterns, and BKGR. And sharp enough. The foreground is unfortunately distracting and as you implied, it would have been much better if the bird had been standing on the ridge rather than behind it. Ditto Mike on the bill/body merge.
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    Mike,

    Would you be kind enough to point out where extra work needs to be done?

    Artie & Mike

    Thanks for pointing the merge, it is something I had completely overlooked in my excitement. I will now return to look at the other images.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ken Watkins View Post
    Mike,

    Would you be kind enough to point out where extra work needs to be done?
    If you sit back and view it there is a subtle "V" to the left of the bird.

    I think in spite of the less than perfect foreground it would be greatly improved if you cropped right above the prominent rock.
    Last edited by Mike Tracy; 10-09-2010 at 08:59 AM.

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    Mike,

    Yes I see what you mean, I'll try to tidy it up, I agree the crop at the bottom will help.

    Thanks very much:)

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    On the whole I think you've done a nice job on the PS work if it was as extensive as you suggest. I like the location of the bird for composition but I feel like it would be nice to have a bit more space top and bottom. I also really like these birds and was lucky to get some close up portraits of a very bold captive one recently.

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    Sorry just found out that this should more correctly be described as a Grey Crowned Crane.

    Believe it or not there are now captive breeding programmes in SA .

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    Would love to see if you have a closeup portrait of this guy. Awesome light and fantastic pose.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sid Garige View Post
    Would love to see if you have a closeup portrait of this guy.

    Me too, but unfortunately for me at least this is a rare sighting, and this sighting was the best we have ever had.

    We will be there next year around the same time, we just hope they will be as well:)

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