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    Ken Watkins
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    Default African Darter

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    Taken on the shores of Lake Kariba, Matusadona National Perk, Zimbabwe,19th September, 2010.

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    F5.6, ISO 800, 1/1000, EV +1.0

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    Ken, apart from wanting more room around the subject and a better HA, I'm really liking this image. Sweet BG and a good view of both wings. Could the darks go darker? (I'm only familiar with our Anhingas here in N.A. and comparing to that)

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    Daniel,

    Thanks for your comments most of my bird images are not that good but I think I am improving with everybodys help:) I am quite pleased with this.

    The only room I had was at the bottom where I did not need it. I agree that slight turn towards me would have helped. As for the colour I am not sure, under normal lighting it would be darker, but it was lit by the setting sun and I quite liked the resultant colours

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    Thanks for the additional remarks Ken. After adding back some of that space below it would be easy to also digitally add some canvas above as the BG is relatively smooth to work with (if you are into that type of manipulation).

    P.S. I find you've posted some rather nice bird images!!:cool:

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    Super pose and colours well exposed and a lovely BG.
    Chris Kotze

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    What amazing light you have here and the BG is just to die for. I have no problem with the HA here. I would just like to see a bit more room.

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    All of your comments have made me rethink, better still to look at other images from this sighting to see if I have anything better. I chose this for the lighting, but I think I have found what I think a better one, more to the point I remembered that this was actually taken from a drifting boat on Lake Kariba.

    I have someting else to post today, so the next African Darter will be delayed a little.

    Once again many thanks

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    Just a tad more room and possibly a little more sharpening on the head/bill, I think one of Artie's Linear contrasts may help or Selective Colour adding 3 Blacks to the Black and 2/3 Blacks to the Whites. Really nice image I hope to get something similar when I go to Gambia in December.

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