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    Default swan

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    The pool with the reflection makes this capture special. However, the dark spot in the upper right is quite distracting. You may wish to try a vertical crop and I think it would really make your focal point pop.

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    This Swan doesn't look to happy about being surrounded by all of this ice a very nice environment shot and depicts how tough living and surviving can be. Well captured!

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    Interesting image. The best part is how you aligned yourself to be able to see the swan's face in the water. Good mood overall too. If you don't want to alter the comp you could always fill in that dark area in URC using the clone stamp. I would also suggest eliminating the smaller dark ones at frame's edge top center and lower right.

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    Like looking in a mirror . . . and the ice's separation contributes to that impression perfectly, much better than if the Swan's entire body showed in the reflection.

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    All my critiques are as above. definitely get rid of the black areas

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