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Nice wing position and feeding pose. Bird looks a bit dark esp. the face and the BKGR looks a bit light.
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Hola, Juan Carlos. Sweet composition. I agree with Arthur that the difference in brightness between background and subject is a bit of a problem for this one. I probably would have tried two things here -- first, underexposing the background a bit to darken it and then adding some fill-flash on the bird and flower and second, just taking the overall exposure way up with no flash for a high-key look in order to get enough brightness on the bird. That's what I'm usually thinking when I encounter a bright background, relatively darker subject like this. Great job though on the composition and capturing the moment.
I'm pretty sure the flower is Fuchsia boliviana, native to South America but as you know widely planted and loved by hummingbird here in Costa Rica. Definitely a Fuchsia in any case.
Ok, with this background I'm guessing you took it in the gardens behind La Georgina. Am I right?
Cheers,
Greg Basco
Last edited by Greg Basco; 09-25-2010 at 08:27 PM.
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Greg Basco
Hola, Juan Carlos. Sweet composition. I agree with Arthur that the difference in brightness between background and subject is a bit of a problem for this one. I probably would have tried two things here -- first, underexposing the background a bit to darken it and then adding some fill-flash on the bird and flower and second, just taking the overall exposure way up with no flash for a high-key look in order to get enough brightness on the bird. That's what I'm usually thinking when I encounter a bright background, relatively darker subject like this. Great job though on the composition and capturing the moment.
I'm pretty sure the flower is Fuchsia boliviana, native to South America but as you know widely planted and loved by hummingbird here in Costa Rica. Definitely a Fuchsia in any case.
Ok, with this background I'm guessing you took it in the gardens behind La Georgina. Am I right?
Cheers,
Greg Basco
Yes Greg, you and Arthur are so right about the bird being so dark. I knew there was something wrong going on in here but I was unable to tell what it was. I will have to think about this issue next time when in the field and try to make it better. Thank you so much for the plant identification. I shoot this one at Freddy Serrano's gardens.
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Ok, Juan Ca. No t-shirt for me for guessing the correct location:o
Cheers,
Greg
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I do agree with the previous comments re the bird being too dark. But I am wondering if there is something like a vertical panorama... if yes, this image would lend itself to it perfectly. JR
Last edited by Joerg Rockenberger; 09-26-2010 at 12:27 AM.
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A different comp Juan, and it works for me. Lovely iridescence on the HB, and I would maybe darken the BG.
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Beautiful pose and shot I like your composition Juan alot.
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Thanks to all who advised and commented. And special thanks goes to Peter for taking the time to play with the image a bit. I like your repost very much Peter, way to go!