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    Surreal. I would crop slightly from the left to get rid of the pa rial tree which would make the main tree more off center

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    Hi Giova, fog generally sets a nice mood for an image.
    A few things..in this case the fog is a bit overpowering and is hiding a great deal of the image. I would like to see more of the areas of interest.
    The main tree appears to be almost centered in the image and I would have preferred it offset.
    An idea would of been to isolate one of the interesting trees and make that a dominant center of interest.(possibly the one on the right since it's not merging with another tree)
    Finally I feel there is far too much space from the trees to the top of the frame and i would crop from a third to half off....

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    Giova,

    I cannot expand on Dave's recommendations. I agree with his comments.

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hi Giova,
    Agree with Dave's assesment. You may want to try adding a bit of contrast......to see if that pops some detail into the fog (not too much though or you will overpower it)......and I also agree with the crop recommendation.

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