My first contribution.
Nikon D3s, Nikkor 500 + 1,4TC. F/9. S:1/1000. ISO:400
Thanks from Spain :)
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My first contribution.
Nikon D3s, Nikkor 500 + 1,4TC. F/9. S:1/1000. ISO:400
Thanks from Spain :)
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Interesting first post Antonio, welcome to the site:) Bird seems a little too centred with a little too much space above as well in terms of composition. Captured sharply, love the water droplets and flight pose.
Hope thats a gentle enough critique for your first post;)
Nice timing, the water off the feet is interesting. Looks like it caught a something too. Exposure looks great to me, considering the overhead lighting you were dealing with. A bit more room on right and bottom, would improve this in my eyes.
Hi Antonio
For my taste your composition is spot on. You have the full reflection in the frame and the splashes are excellent points of interest; together, these prevent any crop below or above the bird. Had you waited a split second to have the head raised you may have missed the food item and would not have the interest of the water running off the feet. I like the way the bird is looking directly into its reflection, which is interesting enough to over-ride the usual 'rule' of wanting eye contact with the viewer.
The one thing I would change is to lighten the plumage highlights. I can imagine the exposure was tricky and blown highlights a real risk that would have spoiled the image. But, having successfully retained detail in the white I think you could take them nearer to white in your processing.
I'm looking forward to seeing some more of your photos.
Welcome Antonio and thanks for sharing this beauty. You timed thing perfectly to handle the splashes, the dangling feet, and the tiny prey item and you handled some pretty tough light well.
Where are you from?
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Thanks for the greeting and for your kind comments, Arthur. I'm from Spain, living in Cantabria, northern Spain, by the Cantábrico sea. Congratulations for this great forum which I hope to continue providing photos to improve my technique with your comments and criticisms.
YAW Antonio. Is this a non-breeding Black-headed Gull? (I am not too good on the Latin names.)
BIRDS AS ART Blog: great info and lessons, lots of images with our legendary BAA educational Captions; we will not sell you junk. 30+ years of long lens experience/e-mail with gear questions.
BIRDS AS ART Online Store: we will not sell you junk. 35 years of long lens experience. Please e-mail with gear questions.
Check out the new SONY e-Guide and videos that I did with Patrick Sparkman here. Ten percent discount for BPN members,
E-mail me at samandmayasgrandpa@att.net.