I like the similar poses, good eye contact, feeding activity. I am not seeing a lot of detail in the whites on the top of their back and head, but I am on a back up laptop, so can't make a critical call there.
I have the impression that it needs a bit of CW rotation?
Ken, I can see detail in the whites, but maybe a little more TLC will bring more out. I too like the similar poses, and agree a slight CW rotation will work. Great detail on their bills BTW.
Thanks for the comments, seems I missed out on the rotation. I'll have a go at bringing out the details in the whites, they were not blown so maybe there is something more there.
Again, my white comment has to be taken with a grain of salt, since I am on an old backup laptop.
But, based on what I am seeing, I think running a layer mask with multiply as the blend mode on the whites, or possibly linear burn, might tease out some more detail.