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    This maybe a stretch on "Bird in Habitat," but I have found this bird in many places.

    Camera Model: NIKON D2Xs
    Firmware: Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
    Date/Time: 2007:05:03 06:44:45
    Shutter speed: 1/125 sec
    Aperture: 6.7
    Exposure mode: Av
    Flash: Off
    Metering mode: Multi-segment
    ISO: 400
    Lens: 200 to 400mm
    Focal length: 340mm
    Focal length: 510mm (in 35mm film)
    Image size: 5364 x 2880
    White balance: Auto
    Color space: AdobeRGB
    Saturation: Normal
    Sharpness: Normal
    Contrast: Normal
    Color profile: Adobe RGB (1998)

    Critiques and suggestions appreciated.

    Rob............

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    Nice job on the bird but tight in the back to eliminate the second bird (as I am sure that you know) :) Good EXP and head angle but I am not a big fan of rotted tree trunk habitat :)
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    Hi Art,

    No rotted wood in this one, moss covered rock, but you did get me I didn't even notice the second duck.:)

    Rob...................

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    Rob, I find parts of the plumage smooth and lacking detail...did you run NR or do some other post-processing there? I also find there is a magenta cast to the image. Colourful individual, with some rich tones in the browns. Good subtle head turn. from the duck.

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    Hi Dan, After reading your critique I went back to my NEF file and found as you had observed, a definite file degradation on the pict submitted. I then tried to replicate my work flow to see what happened. As you suspected, I had carelessly used a Noise remover by brush on the file. As for the magenta cast - I will have to work on that.

    I use each and every critique given me on my pictures as a class in learning. Thank you - Daniel Cadieux for your time, patient and observing eye.

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