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    Hi

    Canon 40D, Canon 100-400

    distance to 5.5 m
    SS 1/40
    F7.1
    iso 400

    NR IN ACR 6
    Sharpening in USM 3 passes 125, 0.2, 0

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    Sweet pose, BG and comp. Look a bit light. I would tone down the midtones a bit.

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    Hi Alan

    so done in curves :p

    thanks for looking and comment

    Rich

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    Good pose, perch and BG, Rich. Agree with Alan about the brightness. I have tried a version simply pushing the midpoint slider in levels to the right, masking the adjustment off the eye and nudging up the sharpening a bit.
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    Hi Tony

    I did midpoint in curves, looks like I didnt bring hte midpoint down enough but you have hit the spot there.

    For this image I follwed the DB asics pdf and tried sharpening 3 times at 125, 0,2 and 0 settings; what additional did you give it in USM please.
    I presume you used Quick Mask:) on the eye?

    really good end result thank you very much all.

    Rich

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    Nice pose and bg. Looks like you could have gone with -0.3ec which would have bumped up your SS a bit more. Tony's repost has really added some great touches to this nice image.

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    Tony's repost has improved this image alot. Good pose, perch, and BG. Fill-flash would have done good things for this image!!

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    Each repost got a bit better. I like Tony's best--thank you sir! But the mid-tones on Tony's are just a bit dark. I'd lose the hair (???) below the bill. A nice capture that has been vastly improved post-posting!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Richard Unsworth View Post
    For this image I follwed the DB asics pdf and tried sharpening 3 times at 125, 0,2 and 0 settings; what additional did you give it in USM please.
    I presume you used Quick Mask:) on the eye?

    really good end result thank you very much all.

    Rich
    Rich, I just ran Nik sharpener at 50% of it's default setting for screen display.
    The levels adjustment I did as an adjustment layer and then used a layer mask to keep it off the eye.
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    Tony brought your image to life. I'd like a re-crop with the redbreast a bit smaller in the frame. The redbreast is life-size or larger on my monitor and looks a bit disproportionate.

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