Good tip on thinking about the BG Lance. Why not shut down a bit for some extra DoF?!
Super kite with almost a baby-like face. I like face-on head angles myself because they give an impression of what others of the species see when they look at each other.
Interesting placement of the bird in the frame. I would have been inclined to give more room to the left but this works nicely.
Gosh, Lance, that is one exquisite portrait! The tonal range is great - really makes each layer of feathers demand the viewer's attention - and those eyes...wow! Because of the way the bird is standing in the frame, I think you could even move it more to the left and let the right side have the extra space. I'd also crop just a bit from the top.