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    I thought I'd try this first year Semipalmated Plover on for size. Light was great, air quality was super. Not sure about the OOF stuff below but it does give a sense of low angle which I like. I cropped to about 60% of original size, dodged eye and removed a hint of "steel-eye" from the flash with some burning-in.

    I normally use manual exposure but the light was so even I started out today on Av. Moved quickly to manual as I felt out of control in Av!

    Date: 11 September, 2010, Time: 1117h
    Model: Canon EOS-1D Mark IV
    Lens: EF500mm f/4L IS USM +1.4x, 700 mm
    Program: Aperture Priority
    ISO 800, 1/1600s, f/5.6
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    Flash: on, Flash exp. comp.: -1.0

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    Hi John - love the low shooting angle - nice catchlight in the eye and sharp as a tack. Know what you mean about the OOF stuff at the bottom - just a little less so the feet were a little more visible would be my personal taste.
    Lots to like here :)

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    John,

    Greetings. I like the low angle (and the detail!) but miss the strip of in focus bottom that anchors everything (characteristic of the low angle shot). There is just a bit of it on the right. Perhaps, over detailing that strip would work...

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    Used Topaz Detail 2 on what would have been in focus and luminosity blend mode (opacity to taste).

    Cheers,

    -Michael-

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    John,

    The exposure and detail are just right, the head angle is great too, I wonder if you could get away with cropping a little off the top and bottom to get the birds eye out of the center and minimize the blurred stuff in the foreground.

    Joel

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    Beautiful image John, love the low angle. Exposure looks great, really nice details. Would loved to have just a bit more side on view on this image. As others have noted, the oof fg is the only distrating element.

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