Very nice pose, esp. the flare of the tail, sharp, nice colors. Agree about the eye/blacks. Certainly worth some tweaking to see if you can bring them up just a bit.
I would judge the sharpening to be right on the edge, as there are some jaggies showing up on the margin of white and black on the leading primary.
I'm sure the eye looks great full-size, but for web posting I agree a bit of tweaking to bring it out may be optimal. Other than that all I can say is WOW what a pose...I absolutely love the swooping curves and open bill!:cool: The sky is of a particularly pleasing hue...
Beautiful wing position and a superb capture overall. I'd be proud of this one. Congratulations!
Agree that tweaking the blacks and bringing out a slight bit of eye detail would make it even stronger.