Like the low angle and the action captured. The splashing water droplets give the image a very dynamic feel. I wish the head angle of the bird on the right was directed more towards the viewer and that the one on the left had some light on it. I would remove the OOF plant in the RLC.
Looks like you had some pretty intense fighting to observe/photograph! Not sure if this is a big crop or not, but if the image can withstand it I may consider cropping a bit more at bottom. Good wing positions, and nice low angle. Had the HA on the right side bird been better this would have been killer!
There is an interesting discussion that has developped on this very same situation on another thread linked below...if you haven't seen it yet it is worth a read (you may or may not agree, but still well worth to check out)