Nice pleasing intimate view on this low angle image. The light angle isn't optimal and this has caused a negative (IMO) shadow in the neck area. I also see some hot areas (or very close to) in the whites...perhaps recoverable in RAW conversion. Another option would be a bit less exposure, combined with some fill-flash to tame those and also reduce the shadows.
P.S. I love the falling drops, but I think the very tip of the upper mandible could be cleaned of the mud streak.