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    Default Pasture Thistle with Swallowtail

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    Went into the woods the other day to look for warblers (without a lot of success), but came across a clearing with a nicely lit thistle (someone correct me if I've gotten the species wrong). Several Tiger Swallowtails were hovering around. Took this at some distance with 400mm since I hadn't brought other lenses or extension tubes with me. In the frame with the best wing position, a second oof butterfly was on the LH bud, so I combined this with another frame that had the bud sans butterfly. I have better swallowtail images that are closer in with more detail, but I liked the thistle on this one and opted not to go for a tight crop on the butterfly. C&C appreciated.

    D90 | 80-400mm @ 400mm | ISO 800 | 1/1250s @ f/7.1 | 0EV | HH

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    Julie Kenward
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    Bill, I think you did very well here. You're right - it's pretty rare that you get a nice looking butterfly on a perch this nice - I would have left the whole plant in as well! You do have a darker area in the ULC - might try raising the lower tones on the image and then masking back in the rest of the original so they are closer in tone throughout the image. I personally use the Nik Software Viveza to do these kinds of tasks and love it for this very kind of correction - it will let you raise or lower the tonal ranges (among other things) in specific areas or color ranges without the use of masks...quick in and out and back to PS!

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    Thanks Jules. I didn't get any more of the plant in the image; I cropped to vert and just trimmed a bit off the top for comp. The dark area was almost a black hole in the original. I cloned in some of the olive tones to bring it up some, but perhaps could have done a little more without making it too uniform. I should look into Viveza. I also got a nice side view of the female Swallowtail on the same plant, and one of the male sitting on top, 3/4 view showing the whole blossom but without the wings fully opened, but I haven't processed those.

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    Hi Bill - very nice - like the composition and the open wings - agree with Jules re the dark area in the BG - I like the inclusion of the whole plant - tells more of the story than just seeing a tight crop of the butterfly.
    Like it.

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    I like this a lot, Bill. Very nice colors and detail. I like the pose you captured as well.
    Peter

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    I really like the composition here Bill, in fact I like almost everything about the image. I would suggest a couple of small processing edits to raise it to the top: boost the saturation a little, and lightly burn the rear wings to reduce the brightness a bit. I tried these in Photoshop and it worked really well. Agree with the others about slight adjustments to the BG. Overall though I think this is an excellent image all round.

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    Thank you Lance, Peter and John. John-I've reposted to incorporate your helpful suggestions, brightening up the darkest part of the bg, burning parts of the wings and boosting the saturation. I tried not to overdo any of those interventions, but it definitely helps. I appreciate the comments and suggestions.

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