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    Default Black Dimond! | Common Starling



    Camera : Canon 50D
    Lens : Canon 100-400L IS
    ISO : 400
    Speed : 1/800 sec.
    Aperture : F/7.1

    Taken at Jamnagar (Gujarat), India.

    Would love to know your suggestions on this.... :)

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    Sweet light, sharp, and a very good head angle. A very pretty image for what looks like a garbage dump.... :) I would eliminate the four white specks on the burlap along the bottom frame edge.
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    Nice colours on the starling, and good comp. Although I find the BG mildly distracting, I do find the patterns and colours quite intriguing. There is blown area alonng the top edge that could be fixed by cloning some neighbouring pixels.

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    I love the bird's pose and detail. I concur with the background comments, and would suggest, as long as you're cloning, to soften, color-over or at least reduce the brightness of the large white spot above the head. The BG hues overall are very appealing, in spite of their material origins.
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    The background is a bit distracting but, in this case, I think that works quite good because adds information about the habitat of the species with details enought to think that is a lot of garbage. Composition, pose, light ans sharpness works fine for me. Thanks for sharing :)

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    Thanks a lot Arthur sir, Daniel sir, Bill sir & Juan sir for your kind words. As you all noted here the BG was garbage full of plastic bags. The bird was searching food there & I got chance to click it. Thanks a lot for your suggestions. I'll try to work on that & will repost it. I'm still on the learning phase & your suggestions will help me a lot.... :)

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    Great eye contact and exposure Subject is sharp with good colours. Nit covered. Well done

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    The bird is very sharp and the exposure looks spot on . The blown highlights distract , but the other colours do add to the image !

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