Harsh afternoon light, but the proximity of the birds here is governed by the tide, and today it was high at 4pm. I couldn't have got any lower without falling over a cliff.
From the looks of it you needn't go any lower here - looks just fine. Nice alert pose, and you got a good HA to go with it. I kinda like the molting plumage too. The contraty look from the harsh light could be tamed by using a reverse S-curve. I would also like less space behind the bird, and more above (and in front to retain the current aspect ratio).