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    In the higlands of center Mexico, arid shrub.

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    Raul:

    Ouch! Very interesting perch, really like the one toe up on the spine. Good angle of bird in frame, slight open mouth, good exposure. I think the head could stand just a bit more sharpening. From an aesthetic standpoint, I might make the signature a bit smaller, it distracts from the bird.

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    Cool perch and nice comp.
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    Hey Raul,
    I really like the perch and the bird angle is vey nice. I might go for a bit off the top fro my tastes.....but you will get disagreement on that point from others. O do wonder about the sharpness like Randy....but that may be correctable.

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    Thanks for the critic, very usefull.

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    Nice bird on a cool perch. I would move the bird higher in the frame, including more perch and less sky in the composition. Agree with the others about sharpness.
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    Great exposure and perch. Like the colours. Ditto more sharpening.

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