tough call on the oof ducks, but more of an approach angle and detail would help the egret a lot IMO.
The bg is beautifully toned, egret right on horizon/shoreline might not be best visually.
If this was from a RAW file, might get a re-process bit tighter as there appears to be some recoverable
detail in the white
don't mean to sound too critical, but I think this has good potential