Lovely portrait, nice clean background good catch light in the eye. My only comment is the OOF flower in the foreground maybe you could crop slightly at the bottom so that the vividness of the flowers are less distracting.
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Great singing pose! Artie makes an excellent suggestion about the yellows of an otherwise excellent perch. I don't know what these birds look like but it seems like some more contrast might help.
Thanks for the tips! I'm moving through hundreds of shots but will swing back and apply your suggestions. The flower is an obvious problem, but I was wondering about contrast. What exactly could be improved, and how exactly would I make the improvement?