
Originally Posted by
Phil Ertel
Hi John,
Interesting image. I like the sense of depth you obtained with the inclusion of the out-of-focus birds in the foreground. I also like how you have the birds on the rock place in the frame. Having clean space on either side of the birds in focus presents very nicely. The background is very different form most of the presentations I see. I have gone back and forth a few times on whether it works for me or not but finely landed on "I like it".
May I suggest that you might add a couple of black point in selective colors to the blacks and neutrals (might help make it pop).
Thanks for sharing.