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    wandering in the weekeng I noticed this geometric texture perhaps not exactly focusedin the centre crop the lowest part?
    70mm f8 1/8 spot aperture priority ISO320
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    Valerio..I see what you were trying to accomplish but the image being totally out of focus, doesn't work for me..

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    Valerio, As presented I might crop a bit off the bottom and run a round of sharpening to the center area to create a focal point. I think next time you are out shooting something like this try to lock focus on the center area so the viewer has a sharp area to rest his eye.

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    I really like the idea of the shot.

    You also may want to try and get the focal point in one of the third points.

    Dave

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    As David, I think the idea wasn't too bad , but to get focus, yes is a problem.Thanks

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    Hey Valerio,
    Great advice given above! I do think you need to get the center in focus.....and perhaps on one of the ROT positions......could be soft due to 1/8 sec exposure......so be careful there too.

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    Good advice given above. I like the composition and the vision behind this image. Sharing here will give you next steps and improve your photography. Thanks for posting.

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