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    Red-knobbed Coot.
    Image created at our local bird sanctuary.

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    Great pose and action captured! I assume this is a significant crop as I can't see fine detail.

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    Good timing to catch the action, Arno. I might raise the black point slightly and darken the mid tones as the image looks a little bright which is washing out the darks.
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    Tony's excellent repost illustrated my major concern. This needs a crop from the bottom leaving only a small portion of the body; the large but incomplete reflection of said body makes the image bottom heavy for me. Very sharp and a great running pose.
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    You nailed the action on this one. Not an easy task. Tony and Artie both voiced my only suggestions. Thanks for sharing!

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    The pose is excellent with both feet visible. Crop is always tough one with these and this one is very good. Is there a slight color cast? or maybe its just the light. Agree with Artie on crop. Would have been significantly better with lower angle IMO but that is not always possible and catching this action panning at high fps while lying flat is also quite tough. The "Coot run on water" is harder than it seems....well done Arno.

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    Good points mentioned above but a very good action shot. I like the bright eye and the splash.

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    good points especially on cropping the reflection away...repost is great. love these guys when they're going all psycho Arno :)
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    Thanks guys for the very positive and constructive comments .They are always appreciated!

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