Project feathers: "Loanly feather"

[amir ben dov]

Hi

great idea
sorry for taking too much time to publish


amir

[Graeme Sheppard]

I like this and I think it works for me because the water has nice straight lines top and bottom to frame the feather. The feather itself has a pleasing curl that is reflected not just in shape but also in colour in some parts (to the right).
The only thing I'd change would be to remove the two dark lines just above the right hand tip of the feather.

[Connie Mier]

I like the feather very much especially with it's reflection. The water lines are a nice touch as well. I would like to see the feather stand out a bit more, give it a bit more punch. Lightening it would help I think.

[Fabs Forns]

A contrast boost and some CCW rotation would take this one over the top. Thanks for participating in the project.

[Graeme Sheppard]

... and some CCW rotation would take this one over the top.

It's all taste, but I'm not sure about the rotation - to my mind the lean of the water lines is balanced by the stronger curl on the right of the feather as compared to its left.

GS