Cure little fellow. I like the open beak and the kick-back leg. The water in front of the chick is very lovely. The observations that I find distracting are;
1. The head angle: for this pose to work the head angle needs to be parallel. As presented with the head angling away is the biggest issue for me.
2. I would have liked a greater depth-of-field that would have allowed the left foot to be in or at least more in focus. I would have increased the ISO to try and gain more depth of field.
3. I would try and tone down the highlights on the bill.