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    Niece playing on a tire swing at a park in Kansas

    Only my second attempt at a blur . . . this is totally new to me! Thanks for all of the other fabulous images posted, everyone! It's great to see such variety of talent.

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    Sandra, Excellent amount of blur and the colors are really nice. Exposure looks good too. You might want to tone down the white streak just a tiny bit. Very nice blur-especially for your second attempt. My first 100 blurs were less than average for sure.

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    Like it Sandra. Gives such a nice feeling with the blur. Like your colours, (but do find the white a little distracting). Well done.

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    Sandra, this is a nice blur. I like the colors and the amount of detail in the back of the dress and her helmet. Be careful, blurs can be addicting:)
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    Hi Sandra, this is very nicely captured. I like the sharpness of the girl's head and arm in contrast to the motion all around. Nice complementary colors too!
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    I like this a lot, Sandra! Such lovely colors and sense of motion with just enough detail on the girl. Agree on toning down the white streak.
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    I love the degree of blurring here as well as your framing, but what really makes this one for me is that the child's head is pretty close to being sharp.
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    Thank you, everyone! I took a whole slew of photographs, but this was the better background of my choices. I'll work out taking out that white line, I agree--it is distracting. I'm learning how to clone and patch. . .not easy to make it look realistic. Practice practice practice.

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    Sandra, One tip that I use for the clone tool to cover a white streak in a blurred image is to lower the opacity to approx 30% and using a soft(relatively large) brush go over the area cloning from an area within the image that seems neutral. In this image the green BG area.

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