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    I went out this morning right after a heavy all night rain and not much was going on but I did happen to catch this little guy.


    50D 400 5.6L 400ISO Aperture Priority
    f5.6 @ 1/1000 no flash
    cloned out a few twigs behind the bird.
    Last edited by Bernie Howe; 07-31-2010 at 06:41 PM. Reason: forgot one thing

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    Hi Bernie - Sharp!! Like the pose and good detail. Might lighten the eye just a fraction and sharpen it a little more.
    Might also remove the bloom from the twig at the bottom - eye keeps going to it.
    Not sure about the leafs behind the head - IMHO sort of look lost there all by themselves.

    Doing well though - Like it!!

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    Is this what you mean?


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    Hi Bernie, great job on removal! I like the pose along with seeing good detail.
    I would lighten the bird(right now it's dark with not much dimension) and a contrast adj.
    Interesting subject!

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