Some more space, especially at the right would have been better. Another round of sharpening, would be good. In this case, I would prefer more space at the bottom rather than at the top. One of the reason being the depth of field doesn't cover the top corner portion. Thanks for sharing.
Glad to see you got back OK, I like the second one better Stuart. And I know you have many more to go, I'm not enthralled with any of mine because of the rain all day. But I'll work on a couple of them.