Very nice image Aidan, I like the exposure, head angle, and BG. In an ideal world I'd wish for a bit more DOF to cover the tail, but looks like you were working under ISO constraints.
Another with an Alan Murphy-esque feel to it again with the over the shoulder look. Only you need to train the birds to land exactly where on the branch you want it to, in this case, about 1 3/4 inches to our left. You will need to go back and study his set-up guide some more m:)
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