Lovely image, Stuart. I like the pose and highlights on the eyes and beaks. Whites look very warm to me - I often have difficulty with this in trying to recapture what I recall and what looks more neutral. Tried to reduce the cast that I am seeing.
Stuart I like your original version a lot better, the complementary BG colors are fantastic. Looking at your SS, you could have stopped down here to get more DOF whilst still maintaining a nice OOF BG.