40D with 400 f/5.6L Av Mode ISO 400 1/500 sec f/5.6 spot metering
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40D with 400 f/5.6L Av Mode ISO 400 1/500 sec f/5.6 spot metering
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Hi Paul,
A sweet capture of a lovely little bird. I do feel that the perch overpowers it somewhat and on the LHS of the bird's breast I can see an odd streak of white?
Best,
Nicki
I like the background and the angle of the bird as it provides a good view of the bird with a good head angle. I see good detail.
The light on the bird appears to have been a little harsh as the white are bright in spots and the darks especially in the thorax area are dark. I agree with NIcki's comment on the size of the perch. If this is a set-up and this is the size of bird you targeting, I would suggest trying a smaller diameter perch.
This is what I would do if this were my image.
1) I would lighten the image. A curves adjustment with a reversed curves to reduce the contrast a little and lighten the image and then to open the dark area of the bird I would run some shadow/highlight adjustment. I toned down the perch due to it becoming to light for my taste from the pervious adjustments
2) I see some green on the white of the breast (probably from the vegetation). I used a color and selected an area of white that should match and painted over the green. I did the same on the tail only selected a gray area to match.
The repost is a big improvement but there is still too much green on the breast feathers. Was this at a feeder set-up? Denise Ippolito has a pretty good trick that she uses to make too fat perches skinnier. I have not learned that one yet.
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Ah, that's what I thought. You might wish to learn to select and set up attractive perches near you feeder. First I would recommend studying the Backyard Set-up section of the practicalities section of The Art of Bird Photography II (916 pages on CD only) and once you have mastered the basics, get a copy of Alan Murphy's Guide to Songbird Set-Up Photography.
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