Hi Scott,
A lovely moment captured - those dances are such fun to watch :)
Sharpness looks great and the muted colours are so pretty. I might just tone down the eye a little.
Best,
Nicki
It is a very fun pose, like that the head is clear of the back wing, dangling feet, sense of action.
Despite the soft light, it still strikes me as being too contrasty. Agree with Nicki about the eye.
A bit more space below might be nice as well.