The lighting and size differences make this superb. I do agree that it would be better either without the adult in the background or with her full in the frame and in focus (we can't have everything with a Prime lens and fixed distance though).
How is Hwange these days? Is poaching still a big issue there and are there problems with human interference??
Rachel,
I have given it a go which transpired to be far from easy. I think that knowing it was there before makes it difficult for me to not see the edge.
What do you think?
Please do not ask why it is now redder. It comes from the original TIFF!