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    AlvanBuckley
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    Shot near downtown Toronto this past May!
    Cloudy conditions so it's a pretty bland looking shot (mostly drab looking colours). Nevertheless, I like how you can see the foot and the pebbles/rocks look nice, imo.

    ISO 200
    0 ev
    f/5.6
    SS 1/500
    Nikon D300s + VR 80-400 @ 400mm

    C&C would be appreciated!
    thanks in advance :)
    -Alvan Buckley

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    Simple and effective comp. Like the foot and pebbles, as is. Head area could be a bit sharper, seems soft just below the eye. Nice detail Alvan.:)

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    Nice low angle and i like the foot up pose ! Comp works well. Will RUN another round of sharpening ? Well done !

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    Alvan:

    I like the pose and placement in frame. Might consider a very small crop down from top.

    If you want to tweak the brightness, might I suggest adjusting the white point a bit to brighten the image ( pull the right hand slider in a bit in curves, watching for any blown highlight warnings). You can then lift the middle of the curve just a bit to brighten it.
    I tried this, and felt it opened the image up, removed a slight sense of murkiness, without changing the overall balance.

    Just an option.

    Cheers

    Randy

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    Nice pose with the foot up. Good low angle too. Some fill flash would help for cloudy days.

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