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Thread: Ruddy Turnstone

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    Rene A
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    Default Ruddy Turnstone

    Taking with a "fixed" Mark at Jupiter Pier, FL testing the cam.

    Be merciful with me I'm a beginner:)

    Thanks

    nctemper
    Last edited by Rene A; 01-05-2009 at 08:28 AM.

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    Alfred Forns
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    .... no mercy will be shown !!!!!

    Lot of good things here Good head angle and exposure If you could make the image from a lower level it would improve dramatically Would also suggest to move the bird back into the frame The usual "rule" is to have more room up front ..Also the point of focus seems to be on the shoulder of the bird !!!!! Looking forward to more !!!

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    David Hemmings
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    Quite a lovely habitat seting in this image, head looks soft as mentioned by Alfred. A litle more room on the left and a little les on the right would help to balance the comp more.

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    Jody Melanson
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    Welcome to BPN, Renate! Nice pose, nice colour in the BG. Nits are the focus looks like it was around the tail, always aim for the eyes. The background is also noisy and could stand some noise reduction. If possible a lower shooting angle would help this image tremendously.

    Hope this helps, Renate.

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