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    Took this last fall on one of Linda Robbins hummingbird trips to Ecuador. Just getting around to processing them. Comments are appreciated.
    Camera: EOS 5D MkII
    Lens: 500/f4
    1/200 @ f/22
    ISO 800
    Multi-flash setup
    Full-frame

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    Dean:
    Remarkably strong graphic impact with fine comp.
    Great colors.
    To my eye, a tad oversharpened as I am seeing jaggies along the edges, and I might reduce the contrast a smidge.
    Only other thing that might be worth a look would be to try to even out the amount of vignette. Personal taste for sure.

    Very strong photo. Well done.

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    Dean - A lovely composition with some great color. If you follow Randy's suggestions and get the contrast down a bit this one will be a real winner. Nice!

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    Randy,
    Once I viewed the image on another monitor I see your point about being over sharpened. Think I fixed it on the re-post below.

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    Yes, much better Dean. What a beautiful composition.

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    Either way it is an amazing image, with strong graphical qualities and sweet light!

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    Super comp and details against that beautiful complementary BG. Randy nailed my only suggestion and your repost deals with it well. Interesting to see a perched hummer as we usually see them hovering.
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    Simply beautiful for all the above mentioned reasons. Really love this artistic composition !!!

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    The curving twig, the colors and the companion wasp all contribute to a really exceptional impact photo. Beautifully executed, Dean.
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    Spectacular. Randy's suggestions really nailed it. Orig looked a bit overcooked. Loved the repost a lot. Terrific comp....a wallhanger for sure. One other suggestion is desaturating a tiny bit. The green on the perch looks a little oversaturated on my monitor.

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    Amazing comp and color! Like the way the bird is on the bottom of the frame. Very dynamic!

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    What a perfect comp for this image. Wonderful image Dean.

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