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    Ken Watkins
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    Found this hiding away in bushes on the banks of one of the rivers feeding into Lake Kariba.
    Large crop!

    Taken from boat not moving too much. I presume that what appears to be oversharpened breast feathers results from a recent dip in the river?

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Sharpness and composition look good. I would make it darker, particularly the highlights.

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    Yes, those feathers are surely wet from a previous dive. I like the perspective as we don't often see kingfishers from what a ppears to be a lower than eye-level perch. I suspect you blurred the BG though? I see an odd halo, or ghosting type artefact, around most of the KF and its perch - likely form masking or other post processing method.

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    Daniel,

    Looking at it again I did not do a very good job wth the blurring, in particular on the perch, which was below me. I'll have another go, thanks a lot

    Axel,

    Thanks for the comments on the whites, I missed that as well.

    I would like to plead the excuse that this is the first reasonable image of a Malachite that I have ever taken, but that is not really a good enough excuse.

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    Ken, these guys are so small, so I would take any shot of these guys. Colours look natural, as most tend to oversaturate the colours. Super pose too.

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    Agree with Axel on the whirs. Other than blurring the BG, you could also drank a bot, especially the light branches, since they distract form the main subject. TFS, Ken.

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    Hi Ken - Thanks for sharing a nice image of one of my favorite birds anywhere.

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    I like the pose and detail. Pity the busy BG though but not much you could do about that.

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    I have tried again being a lot more careful and taking into account all of the suggestions you have kindly provided, it certainly looks a lot better to me, but I have to admit failure in darkening the white feathers.

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