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    Thanks in advance for your comments and suggestions.
    Nikon D90; 1/60 sec; Aperture Priority; f/6.3; ISO 500; ambient light; adjustments made with Nik Software: Silver Effex Pro and Sharpener Pro. Canvas was increased on left side to balance image and some cloning on right side. Increased light in some parts with adjustment layers.

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    This is VG Mirenchu. Like the stylized look of the whole shot, and if I were to be really picky, I think the only thing that gets my attention is the tree beside the young man's head. Otherwise, it looks very well thought out and PP'd.

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    I like the balance of the dark right side to the strength of the man.
    Only real question I have is what is that thing in the middle just below his elbow? looks like a plant?

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    This picture was taken at the Miami Dade College gardens. This young man has a tatoo on his right side, but is only the outline, no color at all. And yes, Jackie, I think I will remove the background trees, I'm sure it will look better thank you for your suggestion!!! : )

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    Mirenchu, this is a very lovely image. Excellent work on the b&w toning, you have a great range of values represented. The composition is wonderful. I think Hazel is referring to a plant or something that is just visible along the bottom edge of the frame, just left of center. I might clone that out. Nice!
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    Think it is Mirenchus' sig:)

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    Nice image and application, Mienchu.

    Nice tones and feel of the balancing of the image. Others have commented on issues to be adjusted.

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    Thank you for comments! Know I see what Hazel is refering to, and it is the date (84) when the artist created the sculpture (his signature is not visible) and that it has to go too! :)

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